A suggestion : it's a club so we can imagine new members coming (like men to have some TG). I think this bodyswap club is a good idea so it will be too bad if she ends too soon.
And a criticism : at the beginning, you suggest Keith slept with different person in Tina's body. But in fact, he just slept with his mother and maybe Jen 'cause Kris doesn't want to have sex with his own brother (And I can understand her, contrary to her mother...). I think it's a little contradiction with the first part which seems to me more ambitious than the rest ("It's like you're someone else everyday")... That's why I made my previous suggestion ;)
@suggestion - I've sadly shot myself in the foot again! Already have all the caps ready to post. BUT I can see bringing this Swap Club idea to future caps... ^.^
@criticism - Yeah I ended up basically splitting the personalities of the women down the line. Kris & Jen don't like having sexual relations when mismatched bodies while Tina & Celest DO like it. The 1st part was more ambitious in that respect because Tina & Celest are more ambitious. (not sure if this addresses the criticism)
A suggestion : it's a club so we can imagine new members coming (like men to have some TG). I think this bodyswap club is a good idea so it will be too bad if she ends too soon.
ReplyDeleteAnd a criticism : at the beginning, you suggest Keith slept with different person in Tina's body. But in fact, he just slept with his mother and maybe Jen 'cause Kris doesn't want to have sex with his own brother (And I can understand her, contrary to her mother...). I think it's a little contradiction with the first part which seems to me more ambitious than the rest ("It's like you're someone else everyday")... That's why I made my previous suggestion ;)
@suggestion - I've sadly shot myself in the foot again! Already have all the caps ready to post. BUT I can see bringing this Swap Club idea to future caps... ^.^
Delete@criticism - Yeah I ended up basically splitting the personalities of the women down the line. Kris & Jen don't like having sexual relations when mismatched bodies while Tina & Celest DO like it. The 1st part was more ambitious in that respect because Tina & Celest are more ambitious. (not sure if this addresses the criticism)