Thank you, Lily, for commissioning this. I think it may be among the very best of the site. I was very sad when the story ended, and I hope you can continue it one day.
A question for tehswitcher: How old were they originally and how old are they now?
I just didn't know if they had swapped ages all the way, or just some years.
It would be interesting to see a continuation were the malfunction had left them bonded still and they suddenly swap a couple more years and a lot of beauty, leaving Leanne frumpier and Sydney prettier.
I hope that Leanne grows up to be a flat chested plain Jane. She got her blonde hair at the expense of everything else. Now her appearance fits what she always was inside.
I like it a LOT, but I don't think the last image is adequate for this kind of story. The little girl supposedly became so mature, and got bigger breasts, but we don't get to see a full body picture? I think a pic like the first one would have been much better. But all that could be fixed if you make a sequel. I dig the idea of further botching the swap as the other user said.
LOL! OOPOS!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Lily, for commissioning this. I think it may be among the very best of the site. I was very sad when the story ended, and I hope you can continue it one day.
ReplyDeleteA question for tehswitcher: How old were they originally and how old are they now?
I was thinking about 19-20 for the older girl and 13-14 for the younger one. And their ages were swapped, so they reverse for their "after" selves.
DeleteOh, nice!
DeleteI just didn't know if they had swapped ages all the way, or just some years.
It would be interesting to see a continuation were the malfunction had left them bonded still and they suddenly swap a couple more years and a lot of beauty, leaving Leanne frumpier and Sydney prettier.
Botched trait transfer? LOVE IT! Hope to see more
ReplyDeleteI hope that Leanne grows up to be a flat chested plain Jane. She got her blonde hair at the expense of everything else. Now her appearance fits what she always was inside.
ReplyDeleteI like it a LOT, but I don't think the last image is adequate for this kind of story.
ReplyDeleteThe little girl supposedly became so mature, and got bigger breasts, but we don't get to see a full body picture? I think a pic like the first one would have been much better.
But all that could be fixed if you make a sequel. I dig the idea of further botching the swap as the other user said.
U need to make a sequal
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