Quite the long one this was...
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
The pictures were also requested.
"Ashley, Megan and Vanessa (left to right) stick out like a sore thumb at the Fitness Pageant. Though they are inscribed in the amateur bikini category, they don't plan to compete at all. At least not with their current scrawny, flabby bodies.
They have been planning this for months, looking for suitable subjects to swap bodies with, and learning all the necessary to take over their lives without rising any suspicions. The moment has finally arrived.
-Look out, Vanessa - Ashely wishpers - There is your new body, the one with the golden bikini.
- I can see mine at the bottom, next to yours Ashley - says Megan - It is a relief that I don't have to take the one with the green bikini next to Vanessa's. I don't like her face!
- Focus, girls - says Vanessa, unable to hide her smile - Its time for the swap!
A powerful jolt of energy shakes them, and in the blink of an eye they find themselves inside their new bodies.
- Oh my gosh! - Vanessa can barely contain her joy - It worked!
- I feel amazing, this body is so hot! Megan wishpers to the blonde woman next to her, that now holds Ashley's mind.
- Hmmm, so firm and strong… yours is not bad, either - Ashley answers with a smile, caressing her friends new vessel - Oh look, the girls in our old bodies are starting to freak out. This should be fun…"
---Tropican
This is awesome! Thanks a lot for doing it!
ReplyDeleteYour version is such a vast improvement over my original draft. I love the catty dialogue, and Ashley's role as informal leader of the trio.
I'm eager to see what you can do with the Morthylla Coven and Jessica Canizales stories. I'm sure the results will be outstanding.
Cheers!
- Tropican
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for being patient as well.
DeleteGood things always take time!
DeleteAgain, thanks a lot for making this.
- Tropican
Hello! I just had an idea for a short trait swap story, only one or two panels.
ReplyDeleteIt is about a very fit woman losing all her body conditioning to her stepdaughter. The process also ages her, or at least gives her the body she would have if she had never exercised.
Here is the story, I hope you like it:
"Rachel (left) is a fitness model and a bit of a gold digger. Two years ago she met Hank, a recently divorced businessman, at the gym. Soon after, they married. Her new life is perfect, except for one little detail, Hank's young teenage daughter Violet (right). Both disliked each other from the very beginning.
Last month Violet showed interest in an upcoming local fitness competition, for which Rachel was training for. To everyone's surprise, she asked for her help to get in shape for the contest.
Hank was more than happy to see his wife and daughter spending together some quality time at last.
Rachel feels only contempt for her stepdaughter's physique, she is just "skinny-fat", and her muscles are weak and soft. Also, her goals are completely unrealistic, she can't be ready for a contest, even a local amateur one, in just a matter of weeks.
However, after Hanks' request, Rachel agrees on training with her. Deep inside she hopes that Violet will make a fool of herself at the stage, or run away in shame at the sight of the other girls' toned bodies. That will teach the brat.
Today is the day of the contest, at the pumping room she sees her stepdaughter's body in a bikini for the first time since she started training; and she is quite surprised. Violet is still all skin and bones, but the puppy fat from her belly is gone and overall she looks more confident and mature.
Rachel, however, doesn't feel too well now. Her head hurts, she is dizzy and feels like she just caught the flu. Also, something with her body seems off. The woman she sees in the large mirrors of the pumping room is her, but not the contest-ready her that she has been seeing every day for the last month. She looks tired, bloated and older… To clear her mind and warm up she tries to lift some weights, but she can barely do a series of reps. She stops, panting and sweating, her whole body feels like jelly.
Leaving from the pumping room to the stage she sees Violet again, and the sight freezes her. Her stepdaughter's body is now beautifully toned. Somehow, with each step she takes she seems to get bigger and more defined. Each step Rachel takes, however, sends another wave of weakness through her body.
Now all the contestants line up on the stage, Rachel is almost blinded by the lights. She tries to pose, clumsily, with her limbs feeling like lead.
Next to her, Violet is blossoming for the astonishment of the public, who cheers her performance. With each new pose her body becomes more and more conditioned.
Meanwhile, Rachel is in Hell. The body she has spent more than twenty years sculpting is rapidly degenerating into a sagging mass of flabby muscles and wrinkled skin, melting like hot candle wax. At the brink of tears, she hears one of the judges ask another who let that old crone enter the stage."
The main image I edited:
http://s29.postimg.org/rpipl2qx3/contest.jpg
And another in case you need more room for the set-up of the story:
http://s21.postimg.org/c5861xbrr/pool.jpg
Cheers!
-Tropican
Hello! I just remembered this old thing and I'm decided to abbreviate it so it fits better in your format for requested captions:
DeleteRachel is a fitness model and a bit of a gold digger who has been married with a Hank, a wealthy businessman, for almost two years. Violet, her stepdaughter, is a scrawny and flabby teen, who is always trying to avoid performing any physical activity. Both disliked each other from the very beginning.
Violet shows interest in an upcoming local fitness competition, for which Rachel is training for. To everyone's surprise, she asks for her help to get in shape for the contest, which she does at Hank's request. However, Rachel gleefully awaits her ridicule at the stage.
The day of the contest, Rachel sees with horror how her own body conditioning is being transferred to her stepdaughter. The process also ages her, or at least gives her the body she would have if she had never exercised.
Cheers!
-Tropican