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Part 2
"Could you please do this Body Suit / Picture of Dorian Gray caption? Hope you like it and thanks a lot in advance!
Back in her glory days, a burlesque dancer commissioned a magical body suit, based her own image.
As she started to age, the suit became a permanent garment for her performances. The public only saw its perfect skin, not the wrinkles underneath.
Years went by, and her rivals grew too old for the stage and retired. A younger generation came, and she outlasted them too.
Now she is a legend of the burlesque circuit and beyond. Her few performances are social events and the tickets always sell out. Everybody wants to see the Beauty that doesn't age.
No one knows her true appearance, this is a secret she will keep by all means necessary. "
---Anonymous
The pictures for this caption were also requested.
This is awesome! Thanks a lot for doing my request! You nailed it!
ReplyDeleteI love how you made explicit that the body suit was an enhanced version of her real physique. And a fringe science artifact sounds much more interesting than the average magical explanation!
I also love how tragic the character of Fran is. Probably lonely, a bit loopy, clinging to her old glories, and still obsessed with the love of her public. But unlike most aging stars she has her fabulous body suit to back her up! Thanks to it, her glamour resists the passage of time, unchanged.
The first paragraph of the first part, and most of the second part are very poignant in how they portrait Fran's dependence of her body suit. She is basically an addict, always ready for her next fix, the combination of the rejuvenating effect of the suit and being the center of attention.
Also thanks a lot for being so quick in making my request, you rock!
Thanks bud! I really wanted to do what you set up justice. The words you wrote in your request were really well-written, so I knew you put a lot of thought into it all.
DeleteIt's always a bit nerving when I take on someone's request, and it means a lot to hear that you enjoyed it.
I'm really glad you liked my text, again thanks a lot for turning it into such a great caption!
DeleteI'm generally not much into body suit caps, but this one is HOT!
ReplyDeleteAmazing job!
Please make more captions like this!
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