Thanks you guys. I actually reread this just now and kind of surprised myself because I forgot I had been telling the Part 1 cap from the perspective of someone post-Shift. Kind of caught me offguard when I mentioned "Rachel" was a post-Shift girl who was having trouble with her new identity.
Identity is something I really want to think about more in my caps...
Well written, nicce change from woman being happy with their new looks
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ReplyDeleteTop notch work my friend! Love the writing on this one
ReplyDeleteThanks you guys. I actually reread this just now and kind of surprised myself because I forgot I had been telling the Part 1 cap from the perspective of someone post-Shift. Kind of caught me offguard when I mentioned "Rachel" was a post-Shift girl who was having trouble with her new identity.
ReplyDeleteIdentity is something I really want to think about more in my caps...