Thanks! I always struggle on what to do with these workout caps after the first. Like, they often end with the person liking their body more than their original, and I feel like the next steps would always be predictable--person fights to find a way to stay. So I never write those next steps.
I really like the "workout" captions. lol - Perhaps things are predictable, if you go with the "I like this body better than my original body" route.
But what if he doesn't like it better? What if she runs off in his body with his GF? Or elopes?
A scene where he goes to swap back, having spent 3 months in the body getting it into shape only to be met by his fiancee, where she tells him that she likes the girl in his body, she is a better man than he ever was and they are keeping things this way? lol. Just a thought or two.
You could also go with a curse. He is a personal trainer, he is over heard by a group of witches commenting on an over weight girl. He is then cursed to swap bodies with 7 girls getting each one into shape before he swaps with the next one. By the time he get's his body back the women who've been using it haven't taken care of it. He's now fat. He lost his job as a personal trainer. He lost his house, because he couldn't pay the bills. All his friends hate him for spending the last year mooching. His former GF is now married to his form best friend.
He goes to the witches and begs for their help. They relent and transform him into a woman, giving him a new shot at life.
Oh goodness- those consequences are so dark, lol. I guess I could see some wiggle room... I mean I honestly would love to post more stories on the exercise kick because there are so many "I'm looking at myself in the mirror after a workout" pictures out there.
great caption!
ReplyDeletewould love to see a part 2
Thanks! I always struggle on what to do with these workout caps after the first. Like, they often end with the person liking their body more than their original, and I feel like the next steps would always be predictable--person fights to find a way to stay. So I never write those next steps.
DeleteI really like the "workout" captions. lol - Perhaps things are predictable, if you go with the "I like this body better than my original body" route.
ReplyDeleteBut what if he doesn't like it better? What if she runs off in his body with his GF? Or elopes?
A scene where he goes to swap back, having spent 3 months in the body getting it into shape only to be met by his fiancee, where she tells him that she likes the girl in his body, she is a better man than he ever was and they are keeping things this way? lol. Just a thought or two.
You could also go with a curse. He is a personal trainer, he is over heard by a group of witches commenting on an over weight girl. He is then cursed to swap bodies with 7 girls getting each one into shape before he swaps with the next one. By the time he get's his body back the women who've been using it haven't taken care of it. He's now fat. He lost his job as a personal trainer. He lost his house, because he couldn't pay the bills. All his friends hate him for spending the last year mooching. His former GF is now married to his form best friend.
DeleteHe goes to the witches and begs for their help. They relent and transform him into a woman, giving him a new shot at life.
lol - that got a little long.
Oh goodness- those consequences are so dark, lol. I guess I could see some wiggle room... I mean I honestly would love to post more stories on the exercise kick because there are so many "I'm looking at myself in the mirror after a workout" pictures out there.
DeleteGood story & ssuper use of pic
ReplyDeleteYeah those pictures are always so inviting to me.
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