Thanks a lot for doing my request! I later regretted making them twin sisters, because Ann seems taller than Tanya, so I'm glad you omitted it.
I really like the character development of the two sisters, how each one has her own voice. Also, I liked how you fleshed out Tanya's background, a tattooed stripper overwhelmed by her new role as a (single?) mother.
Thanks a lot for doing my request! I later regretted making them twin sisters, because Ann seems taller than Tanya, so I'm glad you omitted it.
ReplyDeleteI really like the character development of the two sisters, how each one has her own voice. Also, I liked how you fleshed out Tanya's background, a tattooed stripper overwhelmed by her new role as a (single?) mother.
Great job!
Yep, meant to add the single mother part, glad you picked that up.
DeleteAnd I'm also happy you didn't mind my changing things a bit!
LOL OUCH! Great story. I wonder how the new Ann handles her new life?
ReplyDeleteProbably not very well! She didn't have to worry about reports, spreadsheets and other white collar things in her former job.
DeleteCool cap by the way, I'll love to see more F2F starring tattooed strippers!