Sunday, December 15, 2019

Sister's First

Part 1

Part 2

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    1. Thank you thank you. I felt good about this one too. I wanted to write a bunch more about these sisters to get at why this was such an important swap to be doing at the time (and how terrible it was that Kate ran off in Carlie's body). But oh well

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  2. I'd love to see a follow up on this story! I'm curious if Carlie is able to pull off being Kate around Kate's boyfriend!

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    1. I feel like Kate's boyfriend doesn't really care what's going on in Kate's head - my feeling is, he just cares about the body...!

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  3. Great caption! Hopefully Kate doesn't go too crazy while within Carlie's body. Wonder how Carlie herself would react if she knew what her sister was planning to do.

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    1. Oh I think she would be devastated. As mentioned above, I actually wanted to write more on these two but just didn't have the space (and pictures to extend). But I really wanted to setup the relationship and how Kate really made Carlie feel like she wasn't going to do anything, Kate's jealousy of her sister's cute looks, Kate's convincing of making Carlie feel like it wasn't immoral to sleep with her boyfriend since he just cared about her body anyway... had all sorts of thoughts.

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  4. Also voting for a part two! I wonder if anyone would guess they'd swapped...
    Nice like settling in inner monologue descriptions btw

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    1. Thanks! I gotta get back into more of those inner monologues.

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