...and, here's Part 2, along with the request that I twisted.
Part 2A
Part 2B
Part 2C
Links: Part 1
"A mother to son swap where the son is graduating and has his life lining up for him and the mother wants to steal that opportunity. She says she 'gave up her life for him and now its his turn.' Then everything begins to fall through because shes the problem and comes groveling back to him."
--T.C.
You do such a great job with these! Most captions are quick, titillating one shots... but captions like this one take their time, really letting the reader sit with the probable consequences of the body swap. Its like a steak dinner vs candy. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteOh I really appreciate this comment. Thanks!
DeleteI honestly was feeling a whole story arc where I showed the struggle of the son to embrace his age and femininity, the joys of being wealthy, etc. But because I didn't want to dedicate tons of time to just one story I just nipped it here.
And I like my one-shots too!
Yeah, the one shots are great, cause who doesn't love candy?
Deletevery good story,great twisty ending
ReplyDeleteLove the twist at the end. Serves her right. Great job as always. Looking forawrd to more. Btw, any thoughts on my request?
ReplyDeleteThanks! Still making it suuuper slowly through requests and the like. But I'll get to it...!
Deletewhere can i find some of those flowers?
ReplyDeleteMy mom is really old and would be great to have her be young and healthy again. I've already picked a body she will like.
Aw, that's actually pretty sweet.
DeleteI like how you ended it. The son becomes a better person and the mom fails as a young man.
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